Unit 2　Fit for life

Section Ⅳ　Writing

　　假如你是某一城市某报纸的记者，最近为了启动"魅力城市"的建设，市政府对市民进行了为期5天的"What is a city of charm？"的民意调查。请根据下列调查结果写一篇新闻报道。

　　1．优美宜人的居住环境；

　　2．便利的公共服务设施，如休闲、医疗、交通等；

　　3．独特的城市文化；

　　4．良好的市民素质。

　　注意：词数：120左右。可增加细节，适当发挥。

　　参考词汇：魅力charm　独特的unique

　　One possible version：

　　Recently our city government carried out a survey on "What is a city of charm？" All the citizens took an active part in the activity which lasted five days in all.

　　In the opinion of the citizens，a city of charm ought to include many characteristics.Firstly，a city of charm should provide a beautiful and comfortable living environment.Secondly，there should be convenient public welfare facilities.People can find good places to relax and receive medical care.There should be fast traffic.Thirdly，the culture should be unique.It mustn't copy other cities'.Only in this way can it impress people greatly.Lastly，the citizens should pay attention to their own behaviour and improve their personal qualities.The image of the citizens is the best mirror of a city in some way.

　　本篇范文语言地道简练，行文流畅，结构完整。要点表达完整，运用了表示列举的词汇"firstly，secondly ...lastly"，表达规范。文中运用了"Only in this way can it impress people greatly."这样的倒装句，体现了作者扎实的基本功。

　　1．All the citizens took an active part in the activity which lasted five days in all.

　　这是一个含有定语从句的复合句，关系代词的正确选择体现了作者扎实的基本功。

　　2．Only in this way can it impress people greatly.

　　这是一个倒装句，体现了作者对语言的灵活运用。

　　比较下面两个句子：

　　句1：There should be fast traffic.

　　句2：Besides，the traffic should be convenient.

　　在句2中，运用了高级词汇convenient，比fast表达的意思更丰富、形象。

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