写作句型锤炼

主体段落常用句型锤炼之九：when作并列连词

先熟读背诵--精彩句型烂熟于心

1. I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going.

我正要放弃时，我的父亲来鼓励我坚持下去。(福建卷·书面表达)

2.She was just about to say something more when she noticed the unhappy look on his face.

她刚要再说些什么，却突然看到了他不快的脸色。

3. He was still smiling when the door opened and his wife came in.

他正笑着的时候，门突然开了，他妻子走了进来。

4.He was on the point of leaving when someone knocked at the door.

他刚要走就有人敲门。

5.She had just finished her homework when her mother asked her to practise playing the piano.

她刚做完作业，她妈妈就让她练习弹钢琴。

后临摹仿写--妙语佳句信手拈来

1.孩子们正在操场上踢足球， 突然下起了大雨。

The__children__were__playing__football__on__the__playground,__when__it__began__to__rain.

2.我们正准备给你打电话，这时你的电报来了。

We__were__about__to__telephone__you__when__your__telegram__arrived.

3.在劳累了一天之后， 我刚上床睡觉， 这时电话响了。

I__had__just__gone__to__bed__after__a__very__hard__day__when__the__phone__rang.__