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　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　　　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　(2018·惠州市第二次调研)

　　Not long ago，I was touched by the reply from Tsinghua University to Wei Xiang，which aroused a heating discussion. As Wei Xiang lost his father in a very early age，he was brought up by her mother.Despite of serious illness，he overcame all difficulties and was admit to Tsinghua with high marks.He wrote a letter to Tsinghua to apply for a separate room，where his mother could take care of him in the next four year.In the reply，the school promise to satisfy all his requirements and encouraged him to have strong belief in life.It is not only the inspiring story but also the warmth from the university which attracts the public's attention.From Wei's story，I learned that hard work would final pay off.

　　【答案】

　　Not long ago，I was touched by the reply from Tsinghua University to Wei Xiang，which aroused a discussion. As Wei Xiang lost his father a very early age，he was brought up by mother.Despite serious illness，he overcame all difficulties and was to Tsinghua with high marks.He wrote a letter to Tsinghua to apply for a separate room，where his mother could take care of him in the next four .In the reply，the school to satisfy all his requirements and encouraged him to have strong belief in life.It is not only the inspiring story but also the warmth from the university attracts the public's attention.From Wei's story，I learned that hard work would pay off.

　　第一处：heating改为heated。考查形容词。那引起了一场激烈的讨论。故heated "激烈的"符合语境。

　　第二处：in改为at。考查介词。at a very early age"在很小的年纪"为固定搭配。

　　第三处：her改为his。考查代词。根据上文可知Wei Xiang是男性，故此处应用his。

　　第四处：删除of。考查介词。尽管得了严重的疾病，despite"尽管"后跟宾语时不需带of。

　　第五处：admit改为admitted。考查固定搭配。be admitted to"被接收(入学)"为固定搭配。

　　第六处：year改为years。考查名词复数。未来四年母亲能够在那儿照顾他，four后跟复数名词，故此处为years。

　　第七处：promise改为promised。考查时态。本文叙述的是过去的事情，且全文使用的均为一般过去时，故此处用promised。

第八处：have后加a。考查冠词。鼓励他对人生充满信心，have a strong belief in..."坚信......；对......怀有坚定信念"。