短文改错

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　　　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

(2017·长沙四校高考模拟)It was a sunny day today but I went to Xishan Park for a spring outing.The moment when I entered the park，a variety of beautiful flowers and green trees came into sight.Attracting by the beauty，I couldn't help taking photos.As I wandered along the path，enjoying the beautiful view，I noticed anything unpleasant.Two schoolgirls jumped over the fence to pick flowers.Obviously they didn't realize that their behavior has done great damage to beauty of the park.Without hesitation，I went up and stopped her politely.Feeling quite embarrassed the two girls came out immediate.Then they took pictures inside the fence.Seeing that，I smiled and everything looked nicer in my eye.

【答案】　

It was a sunny day today I went to Xishan Park for a spring outing.The moment I entered the park，a variety of beautiful flowers and green trees came into sight. by the beauty，I couldn't help taking photos.As I wandered along the path，enjoying the beautiful view，I noticed unpleasant.Two schoolgirls jumped over the fence to pick flowers.Obviously they didn't realize that their behavior done great damage to the(∧) beauty of the park.Without hesitation，I went up and stopped politely.Feeling quite embarrassed the two girls came out .Then they took pictures the fence.Seeing that，I smiled and everything looked nicer in my .