删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Dear Jack，

　　I'm more than shocked that you're smoking in this photo. You didn't look cool at all with a cigarette in the mouth. As is known to all is that smoking does harms to our lungs, our heart and our brain as well. You will feel tiring out soon. And you'll find hard to play football with your friends again. What's worse, once used with it, it's very difficult to quit. I strongly suggest you should give it up until it's too late. Firstly, trying

　　 to quit it gradually so that you won't feel so badly. Secondly, be determined never not to start smoking again. Thirdly, trying

　　 to make yourself interesting in other things, like sports.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　答案：第二句:didn't→don't

　　第三句: as→What; harms→harm

　　第四句:tiring→tired

　　第五句：find后加it

　　第六句:with→to

　　第七句:until→before

　　第八句:badly→bad

　　第九句：去掉never

　　第十句:interesting→interested

　　第二节：书面表达(满分25分)

　　假如你是王林，你听说好友陈辉因为压力太大想辍学。请你根据以下要点提示给他写一封信：

　　1．劝陈辉正确对待压力，并提出减轻压力的几个方法；

　　2．希望陈辉接受自己的建议。

　　注意：1.词数100左右；

　　2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　参考范文：

　　Dear Chen Hui，

　　I'm sorry to learn that you intend to drop out for high stress. As one of your friends, I hope that you can give up the idea.

First of all, you should have a right attitude towards stress. Stress is a small part in our normal life. Second, I suggest you calm down and find out the cause of your stress and manage to come up with ways of dealing with it. As to how to reduce stress, you may take exercise, listen to music or turn to your teachers or