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Dear Peter，

　　I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.I want to have the pen friend，hopefully，a girl in her early twenties，and with interests similarly to mine.In my mind，he is someone who is interesting in traveling，swimming，and playing table tennis.However，it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have been kept one at home for some time.With such a pen friend，I hope I can share with her our experiences in traveling，taking care pets，or whatever we have in common.I believed I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her countries.I am looking forward to hear from you soon.

　　Best regards.

Li Hua

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Dear Peter，

　　I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.I want to have pen friend，hopefully，a girl in her early twenties，and with intereststo mine.In my mind, is someone who is in traveling，swimming，and playing table tennis.，it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time.With such a pen friend，I hope I can share with her our experiences in traveling，taking care \s\up6(∧(∧) pets，or whatever we have in common.I I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her.I am looking forward to from you soon.

　　Best regards.

Li Hua